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Under a skin of chains
in hand a sword so sharp;
and a shield such strong
in a territory that we claim
a bard’s victorious-song...
...played on a dearly loved harp:

Dark and high mountains
ah deep and dangerous seas
some glittering trick fountains
are all awaiting in front of me

The gateway you shall enter
that leads down to the center…
...of this globe...

...where a man will be prying
every false respond denying...
...in a mage’s robe

Knights with their armors on
ah maids occur just like magic
furious -fire spitting dragons
are telling fairy-tales so tragic:

And those dazzling thunderclouds
ah lighted up and thus electrified;
recurring a little child’s dread
as raging so deafening loud
hence raising the dead...
...from the feared & detested other side...!


Copyright by .VelvetRose.
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:iconthefinalhikari:
Thank you for entering the :iconwriters--club: Tournament! :la:

This was such an interesting piece, the formatting and the elements of fantasy made for a great execution. Your descriptions were also very vivid and memorable.

Keep up the great work!


*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
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Mood: Joy ~v3lv3tr0s3 Feb 10, 2013   Photographer
Thank you very much for taking your time and for leaving a opinion on this piece.
I will try to give my best. Cheers!!!
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:iconthefinalhikari:
You're welcome! :icondancinglaplz:
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*JeffreyDobbs Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great imagery created in these words, my friend. :)

Would make good song lyrics!
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~v3lv3tr0s3 Dec 13, 2012   Photographer
Thanx, my friend :D
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*JeffreyDobbs Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure! :)
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Mood: Pissed Off ~v3lv3tr0s3 Dec 8, 2012   Photographer
How I hate these people, who download art and do not mark it as a favorite! Why are you doing it then?
Maybe you publish it under your own goddamn name! Bastards!
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*JeffreyDobbs Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You can click off the option to allow downloads in the submission/edit screen. (In case you didn't know)
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Mood: Remorse ~v3lv3tr0s3 Dec 13, 2012   Photographer
Thank you for the info ... no I simply untouched the download button because they can copy and paste it in any other way ... no I am only angry as if you don't like it why use it!? They could leave a comment or something similar. Cheers Jeffrey!
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*JeffreyDobbs Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome! And, I agree completely.

Regardless, I enjoyed the piece. :)
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